Sea
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Everyday I go to a beachand find the sea so calm
A sight so priceless
and costs no more than an alm
How can something be so moving
and still be so picture still
It has so many stories inside
and still it finds a space to fill
Its like the children playing here
They relish each moment even when they run
Infecting everyone with their hope and energy
They look so serene even when they have fun
I look away and see a man walking
probably to find peace before the bed
But his steps are brisk as if in hurry
probably matching the thoughts in his head
I want to share my most precious thing
which I will give to you free
Its my understanding of the life
which took my life's quarters three
Do your best in whatever you do
But in the present always be
Do not run on beach like you run on life
But stop, watch and talk to the sea
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"How can something be so moving
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It has so many stories inside
and still it finds a space to fill"
Brilliant lines
ATB for BAT
It has so many stories inside
ReplyDeleteand still it finds a space to fill
and then comes
Do your best in whatever you do
But in the present always be
so perfect..best wishes for BAT
//Do not run on beach like you run on life
ReplyDeleteBut stop, watch and talk to the sea//
Yes, we should pay heed to not only the sea but especially everything thats around us and stop the run. Tough, but yes :)
ATB!
Do stop by my blog! Cheers - Kappu
Stop, watch and talk to the sea - so very important. Water always has had a way of soothing me. So I can totally relate to this! ATB for BAT!
ReplyDeleteDeepa @ Deepa's Kaleidoscope
Some wonderful verses there.. and talking to the sea would be so nice :)
ReplyDeleteLeo - My Blog-a-Ton Story
Good one Nitin..
ReplyDelete'How can something be so moving
and still be so picture still
It has so many stories inside
and still it finds a space to fill'
but stop watch and talk to the sea! That line just stole my heart <3
ReplyDeleteI like the way that your poem progresses,... and I enjoyed its rhythm and rhyme, much like the constant lapping of the waves on the shore. Beautiful...:0
ReplyDeleteOne of the best poems I read. Good luck
ReplyDeleteOne of the best poems in this BAT conveying a very important lesson in life...Loved it
ReplyDeleteyour words are so much like the sea - effortless flowing! enjoyed reading the verses! Good luck! :)
ReplyDelete<< How can something be so moving
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That is what I always wonder!!
Oh, loved the rhyme.. and the poem. Really liked 'life's quarters three' bit.
ReplyDeleteI felt last stanza could be better... like - more hitting types! Finishing with a bang types. But a great poem nonetheless. I had fun reading it.
Thanks every1 :)
ReplyDelete@Kshitij: Was trying to make it serene only. But I dint like the ending as well :)
"How can something be so moving
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Beautiful poetry... Keep writing.. Best wishes..
Someone is Special
I love that it costs only an alm. :)
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